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100 Word Challenge by Emil Gray, dark, sparkling... all different adjectives describing one thing. Rain. As I leap against the funny looking lake as a frog jumping for a fly, I see a tortoise on land walking slowly. I wave to it as if it can understand, as if we have something in common. As I travel through the air my imagination becomes thoughts different things pop into my head. As raindrops fall from a cloud gray as pavement, the last orange leave falls from the ancient tree. I come closer to the water. Four… three… two… one… my last sight is blue…
100 Word Challenge by Nidhi In animal land Mr. Tortoise went shopping. He went to buy a juicy orange for his sick, tired and hopeless wife. As he walked down the steep pavement, he saw a fruit shop. He bought two oranges. One for him and his wife. While walking Mr. Bear was so careless that the dashed in to Mr. Tortoise His oranges fell and rolled away. Mr. Bear waved instead of saying sorry. He didn't even bother to help. Mr. Rabbit hopped along. He was a funny rabbit. Even when Mr. Tortoise begged for help Mr. Rabbit poked his nose and hopped away. Will Mr. Tortoise ever get his oranges?
100 Word Challenge by Nina Once there was a girl named Isabella and she went to a market to buy an orange so she can eat it for her dinner when she gets hungry. Then when she got out of the store she went and walked n the sidewalk and she met a turtle. It waved to the girl and the girl waved back the turtle did it in a really funny way. They were talking the whole time till they came to the house, and the things that they were talking about were really interesting. Then they went back to their house and said that they will see each other the next day…
Text by Svend-Luka Once Toby and Gasper, his pet fish went out to fish. When they got out Toby got a bite, a big one! He reeled and reeled then suddenly clank clunk the hull of the boat broke! He lost his rod and went to the cabin; Toby said “What are we going to do”
“Mrph” said Gasper. “I know I’ll beach the boat” said Toby. Then after a long battle to get control he managed. They later bought a new boat. They never fished there again. They transferred to a bigger and better lake. Text by Emil On a late Monday evening Mark the fisherman is sitting inside his cabin reading about different kinds of fish. One fish really caught Mark’s attention. It was a big red, flat, polka dotted fish which he had never seen before. He decides to go fishing for this fish. But he is out of worms. So he goes to the store. On his way he sees an old lady who is calling him over. She says she has magic worms that attracts fish. He buys them for two dollars. Mark takes his rod and goes to the green, murky lake…
TO BE CONTINUED Story by Noah I went to see the Yankees vs. Red Sox Baseball game with my dad. I was really exited! I was literally screaming at the top of my lungs! I was really sweaty and hungry and thirsty! I kind of was booing for the Yankees because they were losing. The score was six to seven. Some new guy named swashbuckle. I was afraid this guy had no chance of making a homerun… Suddenly I heard a crack… the crowd went wild! My dad and I were exited so much that we threw our food at the team. Then we got kicked out afterwards.
By Eugenio This is how this ridiculous story started. I was just walking around my neighborhood. Just looking around and admiring my surroundings. But then some guy was like “NOOO, you can’t be calm” so that jerk kidnapped me. I didn’t know where I was going, I was just seeing his strong arm on my eyes. I was scared, but I thought he couldn’t really bring me anywhere far before the cops caught him. After a couple of minutes the guy stopped. He pushed me on the floor and suddenly I heard a crack. He had opened a bottle of milk and poured it on me and laughed. “Seriously?” I thought.
By Elise Suddenly I heard a crack. A big black figure came out of a door. Some gross red liquid was dripping down his mouth. I realized it was a vampire. I started running for my life. Warm sweat was running down my rough face. “Bang” I bumped into a rapped mummy. A piece of cloth from the mummy got stuck to my hair. I pulled it off. Soft grains of sand went into my eyes. Will I ever get out? I kept running as fast as I could but I couldn't see. Will I ever see my kind mum and dad again or will I die?
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