Story by Noah
I went to see the Yankees vs. Red Sox Baseball game with my dad. I was really exited! I was literally screaming at the top of my lungs! I was really sweaty and hungry and thirsty! I kind of was booing for the Yankees because they were losing. The score was six to seven. Some new guy named swashbuckle. I was afraid this guy had no chance of making a homerun… Suddenly I heard a crack… the crowd went wild! My dad and I were exited so much that we threw our food at the team. Then we got kicked out afterwards.
15 Comments
steffi
9/8/2013 06:45:54 pm
great blog Noah your day out sounds exiting.
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Jilanne Hoffmann (100WC team)
9/9/2013 03:16:18 am
Hi Noah,
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Noah
9/23/2013 02:04:27 am
Thank you for the information!
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9/10/2013 05:18:17 am
Noah, I really enjoyed your 100wc. I can tell that baseball is a passion of yours, especially from ideas such as "screaming at the top of my lungs!" Maybe next time you could ask a friend to help you check through for spelling mistakes and capital letters etc - these are easily missed when you read through quickly alone. Keep up the good ideas. Well done.
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9/12/2013 12:16:30 pm
Loved your writing! I happen to be a Minnesota Twins fan, and I don't always get to enjoy a win. You should check out my students' blogs and try to figure out the point of view. http://kidblog.org/SCRebels/ They would love your guesses! Keep writing!
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Noah
9/16/2013 03:13:18 am
Thank you! I will try!
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Loch lain
9/12/2013 06:38:02 pm
Next time put more interesting words
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Connor
9/16/2013 06:39:23 pm
That built up a lot of tension.
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Jack
9/16/2013 06:45:41 pm
Sound funny I would love to be there who won the game?
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Noah
9/23/2013 02:03:19 am
Red sox!
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Nadia
9/19/2013 06:47:18 pm
Cool I would really love see a baseball game I've never been.
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Noah
9/23/2013 02:03:48 am
Ok I will try my best!
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