100 Word Challenge by Emil
Gray, dark, sparkling... all different adjectives describing one thing. Rain. As I leap against the funny looking lake as a frog jumping for a fly, I see a tortoise on land walking slowly. I wave to it as if it can understand, as if we have something in common. As I travel through the air my imagination becomes thoughts different things pop into my head. As raindrops fall from a cloud gray as pavement, the last orange leave falls from the ancient tree. I come closer to the water. Four… three… two… one… my last sight is blue…
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Klint
10/3/2013 04:38:24 pm
I really liked it I thought your adjectives were amazing!!!
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Fiona (Team 100WC)
10/7/2013 07:52:12 am
I loved this 100WC- your descriptions are fantastic. Your first sentence is very poetic and drew me in straight away. You've brought together such different words into a common theme/scenario. Great work- very well done.
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