By Elise
Suddenly I heard a crack. A big black figure came out of a door. Some gross red liquid was dripping down his mouth. I realized it was a vampire. I started running for my life. Warm sweat was running down my rough face. “Bang” I bumped into a rapped mummy. A piece of cloth from the mummy got stuck to my hair. I pulled it off. Soft grains of sand went into my eyes. Will I ever get out? I kept running as fast as I could but I couldn't see. Will I ever see my kind mum and dad again or will I die?
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Caleb
9/2/2013 08:59:42 pm
Hi Elise,
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aksa
9/8/2013 06:52:00 pm
That sounds really scary. AAAAAAA!!!
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Shardaina
9/9/2013 06:39:59 pm
Wow very good I could picture the vampire in my mind and I felt a tingle down my spine I was so scared AHHHH AAHHH!
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Sadie
9/12/2013 06:41:27 pm
The beginning of your story was very flashy it gave me a strog influence to read your story
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Joe
9/16/2013 06:38:30 pm
I almost puked o.0 very good peace of work I imagined it in my head that it was that good well done,very good peace of work here :D
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