100 Word Challenge by Nidhi
In animal land Mr. Tortoise went shopping. He went to buy a juicy orange for his sick, tired and hopeless wife. As he walked down the steep pavement, he saw a fruit shop. He bought two oranges. One for him and his wife. While walking Mr. Bear was so careless that the dashed in to Mr. Tortoise His oranges fell and rolled away. Mr. Bear waved instead of saying sorry. He didn't even bother to help. Mr. Rabbit hopped along. He was a funny rabbit. Even when Mr. Tortoise begged for help Mr. Rabbit poked his nose and hopped away. Will Mr. Tortoise ever get his oranges?
6 Comments
Chris
10/6/2013 03:32:26 am
Well done on your inventive story, Nidhi. You did well to include all of the words and use good, descriptive details.
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Joe O
10/7/2013 06:41:45 pm
Brilliant work!Very imaginative,it makes you want to know more that's what I like the best.That evil orange cx
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Riya
11/7/2013 10:01:58 pm
Hi Niddhi,
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Shameema
11/7/2013 10:10:10 pm
That story was fabulous. It kept making me read on because of the sentence starters that you used. Even we did the 100 word challenge.
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Nadia
11/7/2013 10:11:32 pm
AWESOME! I really liked it, especially the animal characters!
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