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Showing What your mind sees

9/4/2013

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Descriptive paragraph by Nidhi

The Messy Room


When the cleaning lady entered Margret’s room her eyes grew wide and she fainted. The pink and black quilt was dirty and was spread around. The books of Roald Dhal were scattered and ripped. When you open her purple closet clothes will jump out and you will be in a pile of colorful gowns and shirts. Tiny round marbles were everywhere. The room looked enchanted from outside but inside it was a disaster. All black rats and noisy flies were there. There were bits of chocolate cookies and strawberry cake on the floor. There was a bad odor in the room. The chandelier was almost going to land on your head. You would break your back because there was a slimy yellow banana skin. So you see the room was messy.
  
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aksa
9/9/2013 03:48:42

I don't think I would want a messy room like that, would you.

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steffi
9/9/2013 03:51:17

great phrases Nidhi!!!

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Alex
9/13/2013 03:36:24

I liked the phrase her eyes grew wide

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Lochlainn
9/13/2013 03:42:31

That was good I like the simile you used and the metaphor.

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Rose
9/13/2013 03:48:09

Why is that room messy. Nice phrases.

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Lewie
9/17/2013 03:48:19

That is one big mess

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